Charisma, take 2.
So, an update on Charisma, Hilda’s second in command, so to speak.
My girlfriend (and wife to be) read the first version to her son. End result is a slight rework of the story. It only means redoing everything, which of course is fine. Together we worked out something that will be quite good. There is kind of a floorplan for the story, the interesting stops along the journey. Now all I have to do is write it.
Have a good weekend, everyone!